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A silence descends
So quiet it echoes in the dark.
The message is sends,
One of the ending of a spark.

All may be lost,
In the game of the heart.
To win at what cost?
For you may lose before you start.

A move has been made,
In this strange shielded game.
The hand kept in shade,
Nothing will ever be the same.
A poem I have written not just about certain times in my life but about one of my characters. This is where he stands, I wonder if anyone will notice.
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PaladinEclipse Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love how you compared love to a game. You did a really good job with flow and visualization. :3
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Thank you very much. I'm very happy you loved it and thank you for reading.

:D
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PaladinEclipse Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome. I'm just super happy that you made it connectable to everyone by making it compared to something we've all done (games! :squee:)

And you're very welcome! :) It definitely piqued my interest from the very beginning.
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